Before and after: a team message
Original example: 'Hi everyone, I wanted to remind you once again that our meeting has provisionally been scheduled for tomorrow at eleven in the morning. However, we will only be able to hold it if the draft is ready by that point. If the draft isn't ready, we will need to make a separate arrangement for another meeting time.'
Hi everyone, let's meet tomorrow at 11 if the draft is ready. Otherwise, we'll agree a new time.
- The date, time and condition remain.
- Repeated reminders and long introductions are removed.
- No promise to finish the draft or unagreed replacement time has been added.
The shortest version is not always the most useful. 'Tomorrow at 11' loses the condition and could mislead the team.
Give the edit a clear brief
For a long text, agree on its main point first. This helps distinguish repetition from details that the message actually needs.
- Share the full text or select a passage.
- Name the format: a message, email, description or note.
- Specify a length and tone, such as five sentences in straightforward language.
- List the facts and conditions that must remain.
- Compare the result with the original before sending or publishing it.
Check more than the word count
Continue with a specific request: 'Keep the reason for declining, but make the rest shorter' or 'Make it less formal without adding anything'. To capture the main ideas of somebody else's article, choose summarising instead.
- Numbers and units: is the amount, date or duration still the same?
- Conditions: are 'if', 'before', 'only after' and exceptions preserved?
- Commitments: has a suggestion to discuss become a promise to deliver?
- Tone: has a polite refusal become abrupt or vague?